The Murder Club

Work in progress
I have been trying to build the chemistry between the two main characters. As this is a about a horny couple of American University students that have created a 'murderous' campus, I have attempted a passionate scene of them sleeping together for the first time. They soon return to their innocent interest in murder.

Read it here, it still has some way to go...so all comments welcome.

Slug Line
A hobby society forms at a well known University discussing the 'Perfect Murder'; little do they know what pandora's box they are opening.
Synopsis
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